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   05-05-2008, 10:32 AM
Syphonfilter65 is not online. Last active: 5/11/2008 2:06:31 PM Syphonfilter65

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I have fallen ill
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I have fallen Ill
and i can't take a pill
all due to this girl named jill
hanging on the window sill

Now i feel like shit
this is a real hit
I am so angry i could spit

I need some help
I need to kill that maid
All because she gave me aids
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   05-05-2008, 1:02 PM
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It's an epic miss...




I was going to read the bible but got carried away reading Tom Clancy novels....what? He writes better fiction...


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   05-05-2008, 1:38 PM
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cipriani said it. Epic miss.





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   05-05-2008, 1:53 PM
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Do  you even understand what a poem is?

yet again: epic miss




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WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOOOOO! DING DING DING!

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   05-05-2008, 5:05 PM
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Not only was that bad but it gave me super AIDS,

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   05-05-2008, 6:00 PM
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you write some pretty bad poems there. your not worthy of our comments



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   05-05-2008, 7:11 PM
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Some day I will invent a program that allows me to defecate into the mouths of other via internet.

I assure you, you will help me test it.


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   05-05-2008, 7:58 PM
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No, just no. Its almost as if you made it up in a matter of seconds... Plus it gave Cheatmaster Super AIDS, as impossible as it sounds...

So bored...

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   05-05-2008, 8:22 PM
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 Wii the people wrote:
No, just no. Its almost as if you made it up in a matter of seconds... Plus it gave Cheatmaster Super AIDS, as impossible as it sounds...
"kids, run, hide cover your eyes! The SUPER AIDS HAVE STRIKED!!!!!"




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WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOOOOO! DING DING DING!

This is the ceremonial 1,000,000th time pablo has started a post with "^ second." Award for most agreeing member goes to......*drum roll*...PABLO49! haha

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   05-06-2008, 5:34 AM
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Cheatmaster isn't just sure. He's HIV positive.





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   05-06-2008, 8:43 AM
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You know, not every poem has to rhyme.  In fact it is a bad idea to rhyme every line in a stanza to each other, but if it must rhyme then choose a different scheme.  The one you have going right now is very elementary.



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   05-07-2008, 3:03 PM
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Not super AIDS. NOOOO!!

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   05-07-2008, 3:10 PM
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I have fallen Ill
and i can't take a pill
all due to this girl named jill
hanging on the window sill

Now i feel like shit
this is a real hit
I am so angry i could spit

I need some help
I need to kill that maid
All because she gave me aids


...This poem is so bad That I can't say anything that would quite describe how bad it is, so I just repeated it so maybe you'd get the point...

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   05-10-2008, 2:48 PM
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But really "I'm so angry I could spit" I'd think if I were angry I wouldn't just spit.

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