 05-03-2008, 7:08 PM
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Cre8ivemind2
 
Joined on 12-12-2007
Michigan
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"Come on your losing him!" Casey shouted to Miguel.
"I'm trying to keep up with him. His boat is better." Miguel said.
Casey and Miguel's boat hit a wave and got airborn. It smashed back into the water creating a big splash of cold water.
"He's slowing down." Casey said.
He squinted his eyes to see what So-low was doing.
"RPG!" Casey shouted when he saw it.
Miguel swirved the boat to the right. A rocket propelled grenade soared past the boat missing it by inches.
"Where the hell did he get an RPG?" Miguel yelled while turning the boat back toward So-low.
Casey pulled a pistol from Miguel's holster and aimed at So-low. So-low was reloading the RPG launcher. The waves and the bobbing of the boat made the shot difficult to line up. Casey just emptied the clip toward So-low.
So-low was hit in the hand causing the RPG to fall and fire a rocket into his boat. The grenade got lodged in the crack of the seat. So-low dove out right before it exploded.
"Damn!"Miguel shouted.
"Pick him up." Casey said.
Miguel pulled the boat around the flaming wreckage and next to So-low. Casey grabbed So-low and dragged him aboard. He pressed Miguel's glock to his forehead.
"Why the hell?"So-low asked Casey.
"Revenge." Casey said.
"What did I do to you, Casey?" So-low asked.
Casey's cell phone rang.
"Can you get that Miguel?" Casey asked.
Miguel took the phone and flipped it open.
"Hello."He said.
"This is Casey's doctor."The caller said."Is Casey there?"
"He's unavailable at the moment." Miguel said.
"Can you let him know that we have good news about his cancer."The doctor said.
"Yeah sure, I'll tell him to call you."Miguel said before hanging up."It was your doctor."
Casey looked at Miguel worriedly.
"What did he say?" Casey asked.
"He said he had good news on your cancer."Miguel said.
Casey turned his attention back to So-low. He stared at him for a moment before squeezing the trigger. So-low was dead, as was Nicolo.
Miguel turned to start the boat back up.
"We should dump his.." Miguel began.
Another gunshot. Burning pain in Miguel's back. He turned and spotted Casey clutching the pistol.His pistol.
"Why?" Miguel asked.
"You killed them." Casey said.
"Who?" Miguel asked, struggling to remain alive just long enough.
"My parents." Casey said.
Miguel's eyes went wide.
"You're.."Miguel began.
"Damien." Casey said, finishing his sentence.
"How?"Miguel asked.
"That was my question."Damien said."How do I get close to a hitman, who has the answers, without raising suspicion. That's when I saw that bastard Casey Chase on the television."
"All the signs." Miguel said."I ignored them all."
"You had no reason to suspect." Damien said.
Damien lowered Miguel's pistol and pressed it against his temple.
"It ends with you."He said.
Damien fired once. The bullet tore through Miguel's eye spraying blood onto Damien's shirt. Miguel dropped to the floor of the boat and lay motionless. Damine retrieved to silver shell casings from Miguel's pocket and placed Miguel's calling card on the two bodies. Then his phone rang.
"Hello." Damien said into the phone.
"Is it done?" The caller asked."Is Miguel dead?"
"It's done." Damien said."Farewell Lucy."
Two Hours Later
The ambulance pulled into the hosptial parking lot.
"What do we have?" The receptionist asked.
"Two males found on a boat floating in the river." The ambulance driver said."On dead the other is critical."
"Get him into surgery." The receptionist ordered.
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05-03-2008, 9:09 PM
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puredolemite
Joined on 03-28-2006
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Damn, that was a pretty wicked twist there, but I'm wondering one thing, what about the secretary in the first chapter, she said he was Casey yet if he wasn't Casey wouldn't she have known?
Great story anyways, hope you make a sequel.
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05-04-2008, 9:00 AM
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Cre8ivemind2
Joined on 12-12-2007
Michigan
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If you reread the first chapter you'd find out that Damien got surgery to look more like Casey Chase. The secretary says he barely looks like Casey anymore and Damien says that's what surgery does.
Did you get any of the signs?
The doctor, the hotwiring/photographic memory,the obsession with finding the client who killed his parents, and the laughing at the irony of what Miguel said.
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