05-08-2008, 3:55 PM
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Blink_182

Joined on 12-02-2005
CA
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what's the theme? is it a story? could it be any story? drama? comedy? what?
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05-08-2008, 10:02 PM
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unrealrocker

Joined on 02-08-2006
somewhere in a hole
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05-09-2008, 1:26 PM
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Cre8ivemind2

Joined on 12-12-2007
Michigan
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The theme can be anything. But I'm not going to have it if I don't get another judge.




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05-09-2008, 8:15 PM
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deathgod_666

Joined on 11-08-2007
the darkest corner in my mind
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console ds, here's a song that i had help with from river. and can we use our old stories if we posted them here?
dark corner
somewhere deep inside my mind in the darkest corner i could find i lay in wait til the time is right i lay awaiting my turn to strike
chorus KILL! KILL! KILL THEM ALL!
cannot take it anymore WATCH! WATCH! WATCH THEM FALL! turn the lights out, lock the door
there i watch taking it in watch them yell, watch them scream i'll use their to absolve the sin
chorus
i'll be watching the dropping -sitting here emotion less- laughing, watching, without stopping come on in, take a look at this
KILL THEM ALL! WATCH THEM FALL! [x3]
DOWN-growled, screamed, sung
KILL!KILL!KILL!KILL!KILL!KILL! (repeated)
[end]
how'd i do?

 somewhere deep inside my mind in the darkest corner i could find
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05-10-2008, 10:39 AM
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unrealrocker

Joined on 02-08-2006
somewhere in a hole
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DID I WIN?!?!?!?!????!?!?!?!?

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05-10-2008, 10:41 AM
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Pablo49

Joined on 08-24-2005
In your Band....Stealin' your Dinkles
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unrealrocker wrote: | DID I WIN?!?!?!?!????!?!?!?!?
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It didn't start yet, he needs another judge



tom18230 wrote: | WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOOOOO! DING DING DING!
This is the ceremonial 1,000,000th time pablo has started a post with "^ second." Award for most agreeing member goes to......*drum roll*...PABLO49! haha |
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05-10-2008, 10:50 AM
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unrealrocker

Joined on 02-08-2006
somewhere in a hole
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shit *** *** ass *** shit balls

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05-10-2008, 7:38 PM
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river

Joined on 01-19-2006
A Warm Place
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the savage wrote: | Do what Dole did and offer a game as a prize from steam...
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*coughAudiosurfcough*
![Smile [:)]](/emoticons/emotion-1.gif)
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Doghog73 wrote: | | Suds has the same problum i do: we are intellegent but have difficulty using it. |
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05-10-2008, 7:40 PM
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Pablo49

Joined on 08-24-2005
In your Band....Stealin' your Dinkles
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river wrote: | the savage wrote: | Do what Dole did and offer a game as a prize from steam...
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*coughAudiosurfcough*
![Smile [:)]](/emoticons/emotion-1.gif)
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*coughsecondcough*



tom18230 wrote: | WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOT WOOOOOO! DING DING DING!
This is the ceremonial 1,000,000th time pablo has started a post with "^ second." Award for most agreeing member goes to......*drum roll*...PABLO49! haha |
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05-10-2008, 9:59 PM
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Blink_182

Joined on 12-02-2005
CA
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just give away porn or something else
like porn
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05-11-2008, 12:40 PM
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jdentremont

Joined on 02-12-2006
Canada
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Console: Wii
Here's the story.
The Living Dead “Gross! What is it?” asked
Willis. He was looking at a pile of bones, a skeleton to be exact. He
began examining it, it was still all in one piece, and every bone was
there. There was something about it that scared him, made him shiver
even, but he was not sure what. He slowly picked it off the ground,
making sure not to break anything, and placed it in the back of his car.
“We should definitely bring this to a lab or something, to get it
checked out,” said Tom as the car pulled into the 7-11 parking lot. He
then added, “Get two sodas, my buddy here is awfully thirsty after
being buried for so long!” Will laughed and got out of the car. Tom
thought it would be a great idea to put the skeleton in the driver’s
seat, so he lifted it from the back seat and placed it beside him. Then
he heard a rattling noise coming from inside the corpse. He looked
inside to find gold coins! Thousands of dollars worth! Some of them
dated back to as far as 990! They would be rich. All while Tom was
thinking what to do with his cut of the money, Will came back to the
car with their sodas.
“Tom, what the hell? Why is the skeleton in my seat? You could have broken it!” Will scowled.
“He wanted to drive,” Tom joked, “But you’ll never guess what I found,”
Tom reached into the corpse and pulled out a handful of gold coins.
Will was shocked, “We’re gonna be rich!” he cried in excitement. “How much is there?”
“At least a thousand dollars worth,” Tom answered. “Where do we go to cash this in?” he asked.
“I think we could either bring it to the bank or an antique store,”
Will replied. “We could bring it to Memphis since we’re bringing our
money-filled friend there to get carbon-dated anyway,” he added.
“Okay, so we’ll leave on Saturday?” Tom asked as they pulled into his driveway.
“Can’t,” Will replied, “I’ve got a rugby game on Saturday. We’ll leave
on Sunday.” They both agreed on this and Tom went into his house.
“Mom? Where are you?” Tom asked.
“Down here!” She was in the basement. Tom checked the phone before
going downstairs. One missed call, from some long distance number.
“Mom, who called while I was gone?” Tom asked while walking down the stairs.
“I don’t know. Some man called looking for you. He said he’ll call
back.” Just as Cynthia finished her sentence, the phone rang. The
number matched that of the missed call. Tom picked up the phone.
“Hello?” he answered. He was greeted by a deep and raspy voice.
“Tom Jones, you are in great danger. I know what you have taken and I
suggest you put it back or suffer the consequences,” the voice said.
“If you value your life you will give back what you have stolen, or
spend the rest of eternity burning in Hell!” Then Tom heard a click.
The man had hung up.
“Who was it?” asked Cynthia, Tom’s mother.
“Just a friend calling from out of town,” Tom said. “I’m going to
Memphis with Will on Sunday by the way. I just thought I’d let you
know.”
“Okay,” Cynthia replied, “Just be careful on the way there.”
Meanwhile, back at Will’s house, the phone rang.
“Willis Flick, I know what you did. Return what you have stolen or suffer a painful death.”
“What? What did I take? I haven’t a clue what you’re talking about,” he
replied. Then there was nothing. The other end hung up. Will knew the
man was talking about the gold coins, and he didn’t much fancy a
painful death, but he really wanted that money. He punched in Tom’s
number.
“Hey, Tom? Yeah, I just got a phone threat about those
gold coins we found. What? You did too? Maybe we should return them…
All right, you convinced me, we’ll cash ‘em it.”
It was Sunday
now, and they were in Will’s 1978 Mustang. They just passed the sign
that read, “Now leaving Campbell, Tennessee,” when Tom’s cell phone
rang.
“Hello?” he answered.
“This is your last chance.
Bring back what you have taken or die!” the voice said. Then it hung
up. Tom thought nothing of it. He was not worried.
They reached the lab, and brought the skeleton and the coins in to be examined.
“I think I can run some tests on the body, but you’ll have to bring the coins to an antique shop,” explained the scientist.
Several hours later, the results of the carbon-dating test were in.
“I… I don’t believe it!” exclaimed Dr. Smith. “These bones date to
today. Our test shows that this man is very much still alive. I haven’t
the sligh-” he was stopped in mid sentence, possibly because of the
skeletal finger that just punctured his heart.
“Oh my Go-”Tom
tried to scream, but he too was killed. Three seconds afterwards, all
three of them were dead on the ground. The skeleton laughed loudly for
a good five minutes, then all was silent.
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05-11-2008, 4:39 PM
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unrealrocker

Joined on 02-08-2006
somewhere in a hole
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did i win now

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05-11-2008, 5:19 PM
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tom18230

Joined on 01-21-2006
Scotland
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Re: Writing Contest
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jdentrement : epic win on the main characters choice of name, you should win, just for that.
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05-11-2008, 9:21 PM
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unrealrocker

Joined on 02-08-2006
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it has to be a story?

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